I think your diary post is really sweet, even though you didn't remember that much stuff, I got this clear picture of the events and a window into how it is for you to be an older sister. Do you mean you guys sing happy birthday twice, once for her and once for her doll? The background adds a lot to your presentation and helps make your post interesting.
I hope you are enjoying your break and having lot of fun. See you in the comments.
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Hey Mariylah,
ReplyDeleteI think your diary post is really sweet, even though you didn't remember that much stuff, I got this clear picture of the events and a window into how it is for you to be an older sister. Do you mean you guys sing happy birthday twice, once for her and once for her doll? The background adds a lot to your presentation and helps make your post interesting.
I hope you are enjoying your break and having lot of fun. See you in the comments.
Daniel :)